Proofreading Tips

Proofreading Tips:  Hank Wieland

In addition to proofing all drafts at least twice — once on paper and once on screen — try to allow several hours and preferably overnight between readings if production schedule permits. The hiatus seems to open a different perspective and occasionally reveals inconsistencies and misspellings.

Words of the Week:

Use uninterested to mean not interested. Use disinterested to mean objective and impartial like a judge should be.

Use unique without a modifier before it — to mean the only one of its kind. Don’t use very unique, somewhat unique, rather unique or really unique.

Some recent clips and ads with errors follow:

What’s More Important? Content or Platform

When it comes to producing a website, Facebook page, brochure, newsletter or other marketing communications materials, the most important element is the content. That includes the writing, the photography and the headlines and taglines. Unfortunately, too many small companies skimp on this and expect web developers or producers to create the content, or they assign this to someone in the company who is not a writer. Our company has focused on developing high quality content as the first step, starting with the  understanding of audience, the approach that will be most meaningful for that audience, and the most powerful key phrases to influence humans and move up in search engines.  Once the content is polished, a template can be selected and modified for producing the platform or channel for this content.

Health Care PR: Respecting – But Not Overprotecting — Patient Privacy

One of the greatest challenges in health care public relations is convincing our clients, the health care providers, to approach patients who might be willing to participate in news stories.

Reporters want to personalize stories about diseases and new treatments with the experiences of real patients. It’s more compelling, and more believable. Some reporters will not even consider a story unless a patient can be interviewed. On the other hand, health care providers have legitimate concerns about protecting patient privacy. It’s both a professional obligation and the law. There are also more subtle concerns; might a “willing” patient say “yes” simply to avoid disappointing his or her health care provider?

Experienced health care PR professionals know how to manage these concerns. Once the health care provider obtains a patient’s permission for us to call and visit, we make sure the patient is fully informed of the process before making a decision, can gracefully say “no” (which patients find easy to do since they are speaking to us, a third party, instead of their health care provider), and if the answer is “yes” signs the necessary legal consent forms before their contact information is provided to the reporter.

Many patients do say “no,” either because of their own apprehensions or those of family members.  But some also say yes.  Health care providers often seem to be amazed by this.

Patients have all sorts of reasons for participating in patient news stories. Some are simply open people who are comfortable sharing their experiences. Some want to help other patients who are facing their condition. Some want to assist their own families; I recall one mother delightedly participating in a news story about her son’s organ transplant, years ago, in hopes it would raise awareness for fundraising efforts on behalf of the family.

We’d love to hear your experience on this subject as a provider, patient or fellow communicator. If you’d like to see samples of our work in this area, please click here.

Maximize Event Marketing Opportunities

Turn one-time events into multifaceted marketing opportunities for promotion, information sharing and brand building. Whether the occasion is an open house, annual meeting, seasonal celebration or community fundraiser, you can maximize the impact with pre- and post-event publicity that goes beyond details of the occasion itself.

In addition to promoting and conducting your particular program, develop follow-up reports on the results, announce the next event and other news, ask attendees for permission to send other information to them, provide souvenirs with your contact details — and gain longer-term visibility. Also, don’t just communicate via traditional print and broadcast channels. Use email and social media such as Facebook and Twitter, your own blog updated on a regular basis, and even skywriting if appropriate.

The sky is the limit for maximizing event opportunities. If your organization has a significant facility that the general public or some niche segment of the community would find interesting, consider hosting a function as straightforward as an open house or factory tour — with an extended twist for longer-term impact. For example, announce an annual scholarship program or launch a matching fundraising campaign for a local charity. Create an advisory group from among customers, suppliers and government officials. Or “adopt” a school or community program/service to be helpful and generate positive publicity.

Start planning now — the effort will pay dividends.

Proofreading Tips

Proofreading Tips by Hank Wieland

Double-check any wording or punctuation that has been corrected or added to the initial draft; highlight these areas for copy editors and other colleagues who are reviewing before publication.

Give extra thought to spelling of common words often used in two forms: complement/compliment, set up/setup, advance/advanced, insure/ensure, premiere/premier.

Words of the Week:

Foreword (with an e) is a heading for the front section of a book or report. Forward describes being ahead or advancing.

Farther (note “far” embedded) relates only to actual physical distance. Further is used for “distance” in terms of time, space or degree.

The verb back up is two words, and the noun and adjective are one word: backup.

Some recent news clips with errors follow:

Product Journalism on the Rise

ZDNet published an interesting piece about the changing nature of product reporting and acceptance of public relations product releases as news, suggesting this is happening more readily these days. I do remember the days when pitching a product story was very tough. I respect that as a former journalist and public relations agent. Another point made is that public relations is gaining over advertising because it is indeed more powerful. It creates credibility. Advertising is important as well when repeated, well placed and well timed in conjunction with public relations.

See more in ZDNet’s article: Public relations firms and the rise of ‘product journalism’”

Social Media, like it or not, it is Critical

Be the Thought Leader in Social Media Channels.

Whether you like it or not, social media (SM) is critical to managing a corporate reputation and the value of SM is in its contribution to business intelligence (BI) and search engine optimization (SEO). Because public relations professionals are focused on creating and maintain credibility and trust for clients, it becomes important in our practices to include social media consulting.

SEO

One of our clients, a regional medical practice, worked with us to develop an integrated public relations and digital marketing campaign. In just a few months, the practice tripled website traffic, gained a regular column in the print newspaper and created far more followers in Twitter than the number this practice follows.  Next, the lead doctor was offered space for an editorial in The New York Times. The practice easily manages to update its messaging on Facebook and blog sites that we created for the client and we monitor the news online and in print to help this group keep content fresh and all channels connected and relevant.

BI

Major corporations are using Twitter, Facebook and other social media review sites to cost-effectively monitor customer interests and selections.  Using social media for market analysis is replacing the older survey model that too quickly becomes outdated. Social media research can be refreshed constantly.

Even if your organization is resistant to social media and would prefer to avoid it, that is practically impossible. Your information can be shared, your company can be reviewed on third-party sites, and you are in social media whether you like it or not through the individuals in a company that are using social media. Rather than be reactive, we recommend being proactive. Get in, be the thought leader that you are in traditional media.

Measuring PR Success Is Key to C-Suite Access And PR Agents Are Closer to Top Management

PR agents traditionally measure success in the number of media clippings and quality of the mentions or references. The other traditional way is by repeating surveys to gauge influence gained. These are still viable measurement tactics.

Today there is so much more feedback that can be gathered, analyzed and reported easily and with little cost to results of public relations. The measurements used will vary from client to client. Some are more focused on noting increasing amounts of time on their sites, while others don’t mind if the time is short as long as we can show that the visitors are going to pages that have been referenced in digital ads or in publicity. In other words, it is evidence that the audience is getting the “word.” I also like to see where referring website traffic is stemming from and note if it is originating from articles we helped our client place or ads designed for digital publications.

We are interested in learning more from our colleagues in the field on this subject. In a recent survey report issued by the Public Relations Society, it was noted that PR measurement is more important than ever to the C-suite and also that more PR agents are working directly with top management. I do believe there is connection in those findings. Measuring and reporting on results is critical to a successful top level relationship. See the article here.

Marketing to the Beat of Your Drum

During a recent networking lunch with the Chamber of Commerce’s Next Generation of business leaders in my headquarters city of  Fredericksburg, Virginia, I was impressed with the presentation by Stephen Whitesides who built a global company from humble beginnings as a drum teacher. Now he is selling percussion instruments worldwide from www.greenbrierpercussion.com.

One of his memorable statements was on the importance of thinking about the fact that we are selling all of the time. He reminded the audience that we should be selling even when we have had a customer for years or think we are already known or understood. Those we serve need to be reminded of our value and we need to keep learning about their needs and anticipate future needs, so we can adjust our sales message.

Mr. Whitesides told us he has plans for further expansion beyond drums so his growing business will be one to watch!

The Importance of a Strategic PR Plan

I had the opportunity to present on public relations to the Fredericksburg, Virginia Chamber of Commerce Small Business Builder Group recently. Discussion was strongest on the topic of social media, but we focused on the importance of having a strategic PR plan.  Having a plan is also critical even if companies are solely doing social media to create awareness. If they want to be able to see measurable business results they should be asking these key questions: What are the goals? Who are you trying to reach? Is the communication tailored to the audience? Is it too self-serving? Does it integrate with the other channels of communication? I also hope they left my presentation with an appreciation for how important it is to have company-wide guidelines on social media. There are potential risks to reputation of being too informal and loose within social media channels. These business builders were great during the session about sharing ideas among themselves, and this is how social media communications also needs to work.

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